Paraphrasing (Practice 3 & 4)

Practice 3

2. According to Choo (2008), the environment receive huge problem when the rain forest is being cut down.

3. Educational process of undergraduates and school is not the same because undergraduates is being thought by lecturers from different major course.(Nair,2005)


Practice 4


1. According to Teo (2006), newly created drugs can be tested on animals before given to patients as they shared the same characteristics as human. This is to ensure whether the drug are safe to use or not.

2. There is no way for youths to keep their eyes on a book as much as on television as it grabs their attention by serving different world every half an hour. (Akmar, 2008)

Internet Benefits Students?

In our everyday life, everyone know what is internet. Everything has change drastically when internet come to student life. Student find it really fascinating because it lead them to the easiest way during their studying. Internet is like their second teacher that teach them anything, anywhere, and anytime. Nowadays, internet also can be used in their mobile phone when to search internet.this make it easier for students and really can save many times because of that. Everything change because internet has provide us many information that can be used by student by just one click. That why nowadays, student work has become more efficient.  For student to find information, they can just click enter on what they search and vast of information will pop up. That is why internet is really benefits to students for their studying.

Outline and Thesis Statement

1. Striving for a Better Life Through Better Air Quality

A. Government should encourage research and development (R&D) work.

• Environmental laws.
• Tax relief for complaint industries.

B. Government should organise enviromental campaigns.

• Recycling.
• Car pooling.

C. Government should implement regulations to control air pollution.

• Hybrid and electric cars.
• Alternative to fossil fuels.

2.Benefits of keeping fit.

A. One can maintain good physical health.

• Build up body's resistance to diseases.
• improve the cardiovascular system.
• strenghthen the muscular system.

B. One can maintain good mental health.

• release endorphins, the "happy" hormones.
• increases mental alertness.
• reduce stress.

C. One can maintain a good disposition or temperament.

• Develop a positive attitude.
• Improve concentration.

3. Types of Leadership.

A. A leader may show democratic leadership.

• Puts decisions to a vote of subordinates.
• strives for the cooperation of every subordinates.

B. A leader may show paternal leadership.

• Acts like a father.
• Gives guidance, advice and instruction.
• influences by setting a good example.

C. A leader may show autocratic leadership.

• Feels he should be the only one making decisions.
• Feels he should be the only one give order. 
• Believes he is the only one having superior wisdom.

Thesis Statement

2) There are many benefits that we can get for our body to become fit when we maintain good physical health, good mental health and good disposition or temperament.

3) A leader may display one of, or a combination of democratic, paternal, and autocratic leadership.

Types of swimming

Nowaday, swimming has become the popular sports in our country. When I was a child, I was very afraid of water because I almost drowned when playing in the river.it was fortunate for me because a women quickly save me. After that incident, I become less confident and afraid when in water. After I enter university, I met when my friend, Asyraf that were very expert in swimming. When Asyraf know about my story, he willing to help me get back into water. When I was learning with him, he teach me about type of swimming that I should know to learn swimming. Types of swimming that he told is freestyle, backstroke, breast stroke and butterfly stroke.

He told me that freestroke is very useful for beginner to learn swimming. Freestyle is very fast and efficient because the legs only need to pust hard and arms move into similar alternating windmill motion. I learn fast from this freestyle.

Then he teach me about backstroke. Backstroke need your back to float on the water, your head will look at the sky that are blue and relaxing. But you can’t never see the front. So you need to use your instint to predit your front.

Breast stroke is the most difficult for me to learn. This is because you must pull your arm through the water, then breathe and kicking your legs as you breathe to move forward.

The lastly is butterfly stroke. This is the 2^nd difficult types of swimming. This is hard because you need to use your muscle together to move. Your arms moved together, the legs must move like a dolphin’s tail by pushing water downward and backward.

Monkeys that steal fruit

Today I would like to talk about monkey. Monkeys are animal that live in the jungle and also live behind my house. Behind my house there are farm where my father plant many fruit tree. There are rambutan trees, durian trees, papaya trees and corn. The reason I wrote about this because it was my concern that monkey like to steal fruit from my father’s farm. Fruit that in the sometime gone before I can taste it. Sometime I’m curious how they eat food. It is fascinating that monkey has the ability to climb the tree easily even though they have the same feature as human. 

Monkey is not considered as herbivore but omnivore because they eat fruit and meat too. Example of meat that they eat is small lizard, insect and spiders. When they eat fruit, the seed will be spread as they move to another place. This become the important of monkey to habitat.